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Yay I finished my AppleDash comic I hope you like it. I didn't put any background on it, because I thought it looks better without one
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Very nice little picture you got here. The structure of the comic is made up of one joke, and it gets right down to the point by the 2nd panel, so good job introducing and ending it: you can see this probably happening in the show, which is the charm of this structure.
I can see you used pony models, probably from the show: the coloring is very nice, the gamboge on Applejack in particular stands out: probably the biggest problem is with the eyes. On AJ, you did relatively well: on Rainbow Dash, they look too big in the second panel, for example. Dash's pose is also a bit awkward in panel two, and you switched the colors of Dash's mane in Panel 4: instead of (from bottom to top) yellow, orange, and red; you have red, orange, and yellow.
Other than that, very cute picture. It gets my hoof stamp of approval, and also because these two are the greatest.