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Just alone in the snow by FinnishGirl97 Just alone in the snow by FinnishGirl97
Oh well, I just wanted to sketch something simple because of all the snow. And I have a hat like that too :meow: Looks like it fits to Coffee Cup c:
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This is an image of; "Squeeeeeeeeee~"

Firstly, the hat looks like it's about to fall off! I've no idea how it can be as it is without sliding off, maybe dropping the top of the hat down, pointing towards her back/flank will make it look less 'physics defied' and more natural. Secondly, I love your sketchy style, but the harsh highlighting of white on her mane and tail looks too rough and rushed against the rest of the image, maybe using shade of white instead will help as it looks like several strokes of paint instead of one natural looking highlight.

However, I am absolutely in love with this scene. Coffee Cup looks utterly adorable like this, the delicate blush on her cheek is barely visible and just oozes of cuteness. The snow is done nicely, it's not too plain nor overly done. Same with the sky too. Seriously a touch more work on that hat and with shading and highlights and this would make a damn good picture!

I'd certainly purchase this as a Christmas Card/E-Card. You should be proud of this. C:
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Vision: I see what you're trying to convey and you do it well, very adorable!

Originality: The style seems very FiMish so in terms of an original style it isn't there, but you DO pull off the style good.

Technique: The lines seem a bit too jagged, try working on smoother more consistent lines.

Impact: Despite the lines being a little distracting the piece is VERY well done!

Personal notes: The color scheme seems a little one-toned, try working with more pastel colors and less grey, none the less she is still a very cute pony. Keep up the good work.
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kagari231 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013
Most picture of Coffee Cup is so darn cute??? WHY??????? HOW????? :iconcuteplz:
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kagari231 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRGH WHAT DID I DO, UGLY GIF IN MY COMMENT AARRRGHHH THE HORROR!!!!!! DX
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starautno Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
lol who bought u dat hat? 8)
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FinnishGirl97 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
OMG you!! YOU! Yes you bought that hat :iconisayplz: and btw that Wonderbook game I got, isn't as cool as I thought... -.-
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starautno Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
lolololll:Ddd well mostly those kind of games sucks://
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FinnishGirl97 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Eeyup c:
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DavidRalphJ Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
Fast sketch? I like the way you did the snow, the hair seems like its kinda floating in mid space, and the hat looks like you could have taken a minute or two to fix it up, other than that great job very kawaii desu~
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SunshineSmilesPony Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like your OC as well, soo cute.
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FinnishGirl97 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Heh :iconrainbowdashblushplz: Thanks. I like your OC too
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SunshineSmilesPony Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your style reminds me of.. uhh. a cross between SpeccySY and John Joseco
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