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Thanksgiving Dinner by FinnishGirl97 Thanksgiving Dinner by FinnishGirl97
This, was the second free point commission for :iconharmonystarmlp: because of giving me premium membership.

Sorry it took so darn long to finish it, really. But 12 characters, it takes some time :meow:

I'll maybe do something to that background (it's all white...)

(Apple Jack y u so cute?!?)

And now I'm going to sleeep. I've been drawing this since I came from school today QnQ So about 5 hours, and I only coloured a few characters, added all the food and background and shadowed the whole thing and mixed some things up and good night.
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This is pretty damn good, you've done really with this piece. My only niggling thoughts on this are as follows:

- The table itself, it shows a much more 'top down' view the the rather 'side on' view we get with the characters. Maybe raising the characters up a bit more and making the table more 'oval' shaped to give a better sense of perspective would've helped here.

- Rainbow Dash and her legs, the hind legs look too straight and short. Especially as the 'top' part of the hind legs should be much more stretched out to keep in proportion with her fore legs which are pretty much 'on' for the proportion of her body.

- Rarity, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo all look rather 'thin' compared to the other Ponies, maybe on oversight but for how they are facing they are rather thin.

- Items on the table, namely the plates look out of place next to items such as the rectangular tins. They look rather 'circular' and should be more 'oval' to give the correct 'distortion which would occur due to how we see them on the table at this angle.

Other then that this was a really well done piece and though I may seem harsh in my words. I do have praise for you attempting such a large piece with so many elements going on at the same time. It's showing progression as an artist for yourself and how you have come on (even though I have only been watching you a short time) it is showing you are making progress.

Right, onto the 'ratings';

'Vision' - 4/5

I feel that you went big on this and for what is worth, despite what you may see as harsh words. I feel that you accomplished the majority of goal to give feeling of this image. It has life, character and certainly made me smile looking at it.

'Originality' - 3/5

It's fan-art so as someone who produces a lot of it, I cannot give it more then I feel I could give it. Though the setting itself is in keeping with the show and the OC does bolster the 'originality' aspect a bit. I cannot justify giving it anymore then that.

'Technique' - 3.5/5

I already made my point on a few aspect which I feel could have been done better and can be improved on. But I always feel that working in a digital medium is a challenge for anyone and for what I have seen from you so far. I feel like you really have tried something different and done well to accomplish that.

I would say you've produced a 'diamond in the rough' style piece, it's good but not as good as it can be. Especially as given the medium used and from what I've seen from you previously. I do feel it could have been done better if you gave yourself more time to consider a few aspects.

'Impact' - 4/5

It certainly has got impact, even against a plain white background. It is in keeping with the bright and vibrant style of the show and you've done to use highlights to bring it out more. It is a fun looking piece and it does really show. I marked it highly on the 'Impact' as it does really stand out well despite the minor points I have pointed out previously.

Keep it up! :)
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:iconalruuna99:
Alruuna99 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
Tämä on hieno!
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:iconfinnishgirl97:
FinnishGirl97 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Kiitos paljon :meow:
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:iconalruuna99:
Alruuna99 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
Oleppa hyvä :3
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TeaGigs Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist
Täähän on hieno ja kappas, Gildakin mukana ruokailussa. Dashillä mukavan rento istumatyyli ja Flutters...hetkinen eikait se perhosta syö O_o...varmaan jokin leivos.
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FinnishGirl97 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Ei Fluttershy perhosia syö x3 ne on keksejä/leivoksia
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InfiniteBadness Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Professional General Artist
Get your feet off the table, Dash.
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MrKyuubi Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Looks amazing!
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FinnishGirl97 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks :3
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RarityLuver214 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
Wow, that's a huge pic! Great job taking your time on it! =)
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FinnishGirl97 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you :meow:
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